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Mother Nature

Up above the clouds begin to form
Wispy arms reaching out, grabbing
What they can find, slowly
Mounting together as one, swirling
All around, masking together, until
One united form so dark, threatning
Peaceful serenity of the day.

More and more begin to unite, heavily
Weighing upon the heavens, suddenly
All nature let loose, crashing
Towards the earth, drenching
Poor human souls, caught
Upon this web of heavy seas, cascading
Emotionless with no regret, washing
Away all grief, all pent up motions, suddenly
Its over, the sun begins to shine.

The wispy forms that joined and fell together, dissappeared
To let a new dawn upon that day, shining
Bright up in the sky, dazzling
The soaking forms who stand hunched, shaking
Against the cold, slowly but surely they stop.

After being caught in the mercy of Mother Nature.

Author notes

Inspired by the 2 days - Monday last week.. 14/07/09 and this tuesday 24/06/09.... that this did happen and i tell u !!! not a happy moment wen it was blazin sunshine before n after grrrr

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  • PureRomance
    June 24
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    The imagery in this brilliant masterpiece is just so vivid and clear, I feel like getting rained on, if that makes any sense. The thought and heart & wording you put into this is absolutely amazing. Another fantastic work of art you have put together. Keep up the excellent work and God bless you always.