Like a flower that blooms only for a bee...my heart opens for you only. Like a sleepy bird that flies home to his nest...I sleep in your arms when I need rest. In your arms is my home sweet home. I'll give you anything you want. Everything I have is yours if you want it. I love you baby. I can't wait until I sleep in your arms tonight.
A contest entry
- Love, Honest, Be Creative by Jamzine.
450 points, ended July 23, 38 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How do you feel after reading this?
Comments
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Hey
Sis its outstanding poem and I understand how u feel with this poem. Maybe one day I feel this type of love again. This poem reminds me of a song that i like. U done a great job wit this poem. Keep da ink flowin cause its amazin

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Lovely...
Romantically beautiful depicting of devotion... "Two hearts" sings to togetherness with a voice of love.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

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I really like this poem its beautiful!


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wonderful job
keep writing

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That was awesome. keep writing . thx for entering.
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Awwww . . . this is so sweet! You have a warm heart and your write has wonderful similes!


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Great writ,
Short sweet and to the point.
It had an amzing flow.
Clappies from both me and grumpybrat20

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great job!!!!!!!!! sry i can't give you clappies. i don't have very many points. i only have 37
sry
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