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Two hearts

Like a flower that blooms only for a bee...my heart opens for you only.  Like a sleepy bird that flies home to his nest...I sleep in your arms when I need rest.  In your arms is my home sweet home.  I'll give you anything you want.  Everything I have is yours if you want it.  I love you baby.  I can't wait until I sleep in your arms tonight.

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  • Time focus on Me
    November 13
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    Hey

    Sis its outstanding poem and I understand how u feel with this poem. Maybe one day I feel this type of love again. This poem reminds me of a song that i like. U done a great job wit this poem. Keep da ink flowin cause its amazin


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    November 4

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    Lovely...

    Romantically beautiful depicting of devotion... "Two hearts" sings to togetherness with a voice of love.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • MaggieWrites
    October 29
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    I really like this poem its beautiful!


  • im just human
    October 29
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    wonderful job
    keep writing


  • Jamzine
    June 24
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    That was awesome. keep writing . thx for entering.

  • Bruce silver member
    June 24

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    Awwww . . . this is so sweet! You have a warm heart and your write has wonderful similes!

  • Great writ,
    Short sweet and to the point.
    It had an amzing flow.

    Clappies from both me and grumpybrat20

  • great job!!!!!!!!! sry i can't give you clappies. i don't have very many points. i only have 37 sry

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