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When Thinking of Relocating

When thinking of relocating
here is the first thing 

you should consider:
Are your odds of being struck by a comet
increased or decreased
by moving around a lot?
They are about the same
I would say...
so now that we have gotten
that out of the way,
lets talk about the advisability of
moving to another part of the country
and taking a chance
on a new love.
(At 61)

At 61!!
Hell ,Yeah!!
I mean ,I won't be 50 for another month
but if I had a shot
at a new love
AND moving to another part of the country,
all in one package,
I'd jump at it.
Let's face it..
youth is wasted on the young
and these days they jet all over the place
at the drop of the hat.
I don't remember having those options.
(Had to play it safe
for the wife
for the job
for the kids...)

How often does adventure
knock at the door
as the years go by?
Why I've recently been
reduced to staring out my window,
hoping that Adventure
will knock at my neighbors door
so that I can run out and tell Adventure
that he's not at home,
that he's gone bungee jumping on the moon
and cannot be reached,
(hopeing secretly
that a temporarily demoralised Adventure
will ask me if I would care to,say...

move to another part of the country

and take a chance on a new love...)

 

And what have you got to lose?

Once we've reached the hemi-centennial

of our lives

we've already lost:

our innocence

our preconceptions

our illusions

our hair

(sometimes)

and our dignity

(at least once)

We know that life can be

sad

disappointing,

embarrassing

uncomfortable

and not the way we planned it,

but it is seldom lethal.

On the other hand

life can be

exciting,

challanging'

joyful

romantic,

and full of surprises,

but seldom if we hide from it.

 

Whats the worst that could happen?

The worst that could happen

is to spend

the rest of your life

wondering...what if?

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • toomysterious
    October 1, 2009

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    Well I am pleased to see that this poem won a Gold trophy. It is really deserving of it, very insightful and full of great truths. Loved the phrase, What have you got to lose? What indeed? Great encouraging poem.

  • Judith Chandler
    August 23, 2009

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    Is the new love hypothetical or real? Maybe you should go for it. I don't think I could myself but just think of all the poetry you might write about being in the new location and with the new person.

    Congrats on your welldeserved gold trophy.


  • waydownuponjoy
    July 23, 2009

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    Perfecto! ...

    and it's not often that I share that! This is a fine example of honest, free-verse that reads smoothly and lights up some good philosophy. I certainly can see that you have first-handedly thought about all of this and relayed that straight to the screen. Your gold trophy & points don't amount up to the wealth this may provide to those that just don't seem to think about change. well done, joy


  • LAPoe
    July 3, 2009

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    Ah a Gold winner.. .after reading this, that comes as no surprise at all!!! I hope Miss Adventure comes knocking on your door someday... then you two can hold hands and exit boringville forever.

    laurie


  • spiritdreams
    June 25, 2009

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    Holy ......

    This is so great and I can't thank you enough. I loved the imagery, the humor (I need it), the advice and everything else.....Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck


  • Joe Savage
    June 24, 2009

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    i don't get uplifted when i read stuff. Ever, but some how you pulled that one off by writting this little gem! wow is all i can really mutter at the moment. i smiled, i recconciled, or however you spell it, laughed on the inside and out. good luck to you in that contest!


  • lunarlunacy
    June 24, 2009

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    all i can do is nod and smile, know that i enjoyed this immensly for the images it conjured in my head.

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