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That Girl

So I'm the girl that's fucked up everything.
That can't do anything right.
That never learns from her mistakes. That just wants to be loved.
That is no longer christain...
she's now agnostic.

Ok so here's a poem that I just now wrote and thought y not post it so tell me what u think be I mite add more later if I thnk of anything

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    June 26
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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Welcome to this site, if you should have any questions, please feel free to ask!
    I would like to have read a bit more, to take the poem a little deeper...it has a sadness, what few lines you have...I hope things get better for you!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy
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