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A love poem (Dear Loup)

Dear Loup, My love
Although i'll never see you
I belive you're more beutiful than a dove
then like a dove you flew away from me

Dear Loup, Light of my Life
Every day I long to be with you
Without you my days are full of strife
There will always be a place in my heart for you

Dear Loup, I'd do anything for you
Scale the higest mountain, Sail the wildest sea
Anything
Just for one kiss

Dear loup;
I love you

Author notes

a while ago, I promised my friend that i'd never write a love poem, well here I am breaking that promise...

well, you all know the story about Me & Loup, anyway i coudn't sleep last night, and i was thinking about her, and i wrote this...

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  • TheRanter
    June 25
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    You think my poems crap!? Sorry.. but this is just...

    • Fuzzyheart
      June 29
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      look, its just an expression of my feelings, at least i had a rhyme scheme (for the first to verses anyway!), but I admit it's crap, this is probably the first and last poem i'll ever write...