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True love never dies.

if i could end it all,
but i know it would be the death of you.
with every simple kiss i know it hurts you.
but is better of this way.
all the pain love gives with ever simple blinding words
that heals the human soul.

i love you too,
that's all we have to do when cry.
say those magic words the pain leaves our soul.
and its OK.
and i'm feeling alright but the memories they stain me.
and they rub off on you.

Ruining the the love we have,
the fears and struggles of the past
seem to never leave me at all.
until now i know your love is true.

If i was to ever hurt you ,
i could never mend.
the smile of me would leave.
it would break into a millions of peices
and never come back together again.

you are the music,
i'm the lyrics.
we are one of the same.
meant to be together.

Lets run together, our love will never die.

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the thoughs of my past, and how they can make or break something if you think about them to much...

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  • aww this was beautiful! It was really good! the emotions were amazing! WOW! BRAVO! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


  • Kira65
    June 29

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    it is a great poem. it has a great flow and the emotion is just flowing perfectly! Thank you for entering and good luck.

  • good poem, soft and sweet. keep up the great work

  • Memories, my constant companions... Good poem, watch the typos though.

  • wow this is really good and i love the last line

    Lets run together, our love will never die.

    one its really sweet and two love never dies whatever happens

    a really amazing poem and i really loved reading it. memories are good to and yes they can break or make you. an amazing poem again i loved it

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