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sinnerman.

sinnerman, oh sinnerman
tell me all the things you can
was it me who was worth the time
or did the thrill put your life on line

sinnerman, oh sinnerman
would you ever take a stand
was i ever worth the fight
or were you just wrong when i was right

sinnerman, oh sinnerman
can you take me by the hand
could i still get you if i try
or have you moved on and passed me by

sinnerman, oh sinnerman
did you ever have a plan
did i make you just too clumsy
or did you ever really love me

sinnerman, oh sinnerman
i have always been a fan
i admit that i did crave
all the bad ways you'd behave

sinnerman, oh sinnerman
i am back where i began
is it worth it anymore to try
or is it the time to say goodbye

sinnerman, oh sinnerman
i don't think you understand
you would have been mine
had i known it at the time

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like a little girl cries in the face of a monster that lives in her dreams

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  • crystalmeth
    June 24
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    oh sinnerman, where you gonna run to?

    this is amazing!
    the rhyme scheme alone is award-worthy.
    and then you look at the content and.. man, this blows me away.
    all of your work does, but I really like the way this flows.
    (and the sinnerman theme<3)
    altogether a great piece;
    keep it up, sweetie! you're on a roll!