Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

A Closer Walk With Jesus*Revised

Missing image

 John 4: 10 Jesus nswered her, if you knew the gift of God and who it is that ask you for a drink,you would have asked Him and He would have giving you living water.

 

 

 

 

 

A closer walk with Jesus,*

He's by my side each day*

I must keep in step with Him*

So I may never stray*

A closer walk with Jesus

To know His joy and peace,*

The nearer I am to Jesus*,

His Presence grows more sweet*

A closer walk with Jesus,

Near to His heart I'm drawn*.

He gives me living water,

A faucet that always runs.*

A closer walk with Jesus,

He Is the living bread.

He is the risen Savior*

Alive He's not dead*

A closer walk with Jesus,

He's given new insight.*

Every thing He touches,*

He gives new life.*

 

 

 

What should I do to make poem more effective

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 8 of 8

  • Iron Saint
    October 29
    Edit | Reply

    Loved It

    Hey Sister, please check out my poem called "Jesus Alone" or "His Love" I know you will love them both.
    Agape James


  • Whispers of Hope
    October 16
    Edit | Reply
    So full of truth this is~ I love how you write hoping to read more thanks for sharing~

  • YungFreck
    October 1

    Edit | Reply

    Bravo

    This poem is beautiful. Don't change a thing. I am not just saying that because I don't believe in revision. It is uplifting and inspiring you are brilliant.


  • darlee77 gold member
    September 4
    Edit | Reply
    I like this. The second stanza might have a couple of your little "witches". lol
    God bless.


  • good bye
    July 6
    Edit | Reply
    very nicely done, oh i i desire a closer walk with Him

  • LOVELY!!

    A lovely write, always lovely when in honor to my Lord.

    Thank God for his amazing grace sent upon us with love, and joy and peace and all things good and pure and true.

    Thank you for the lovely read tonight here.
    Glad I stopped to read it.

    and may you have a lovely evening there too.
    Just lovely!


  • Ellek
    June 25

    Edit | Reply

    Perfect

    I really like this poem it's touching to anyone who believes. A wish to be a little closer to Jesus is what we should all feel. And you've expressed it marvelously! Thanks for something wonderfully inspiring to read


  • angelwalken
    June 24
    Edit | Reply

    beautiful Sharon

    this is just beautiful. don't change a thing sister.

1 - 8 of 8