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A Thought Crushed My Mind.

My hands are sHaKiNg with the phone I am holding.
Imagining the w*rst with every se:co:nd.
The image appears on the screen- one message recieved...
Clicking the link, my heart q.u.i.c.k.e.n.s.
It would Only take a few words for my world to fall down.

I know you're at work, and -o u t  o f  m y  r e a c h.-

You hurt yourself yesterday, hitting your head on the corner of that door...
(We should have got you checked out.)

Oh, flippancy.
Why do we assume that things will never happen to us?

I tremble. That text tells me you're di~zz~y.

I'm sitting in a coffee shop thinking of all the things that can go wrong.
My mind is racing- showing images of you falling, hurting, and me not being there.

I could continue to talk about how this is making me feel, but the truth is It's all about you.
You.
You won't let me help you.

The truth is, I'm sat in this coffee shop and I'm sacred.
After all, I don't know what I'll do without you.
Maybe you'll be ok.

But if you're not...this shaking, this electricity running through my veins
Will stop.
Will cease.
And I'll be where you are.
Because It's hard to be a whole person when the best half of you is missing.

Author notes

Option 6- title prompt. Sorry I wrote the poem straight away- I needed to get it out... Forgive me? Please?

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  • OMFG

    I love this poem! Awesome job seriously only correction I have is in the second to last line i'll should be capitalized. Other then that its amazing, really. And it's fine if you wrote it straight away the reserving option is just there for those who spot a title they like but don't have the time to write at this moment. So thank you for your entry and best of luck in the contest!

    • ThankYou, It's been amended...now I'm near an computer and not writing on my phone!!!