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I Loved You Once

I loved you once.
Then you revealed to me
Who, or what, you were;
What you are.

I loved you once.
Then you reminded me
You're to be hated at all costs
If I don't want to hurt.

Oh, I loved you once.
Then you taught me
That love is a lie
Used to grease the wheels.

I loved you once.
Then you showed me
Just how much you loved me
With hurtful words flying.

Yes, I loved you once.

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Literally written in under 5 minutes. It hasn't been edited at all yet. Just getting crap out before I forget it--and I always forget to go back through my drafts.

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