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Jaqueline's

curiously yet gently
her hand rests upon her swelling belly -
blossoming out -
the seed inside unfurling
into what she will finally become;
both waiting -
excitably -
for the tiny bud
to blossom outside the womb.

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I found a picture of my friend Jaqueline, and she is 6 months, 1 day pregnant, and radiently so; excitably expection.

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