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Dad's Lullby

11 years since my father died

I still can't believe your gone

my heart has been frozen in time

unable to move on

 

I miss you everyday

I miss you in everyway

I miss the hug's and love you gave me

But still i cannot seem to see 

 

I wonder if you are missing me

as much as i am missing you

I wonder In the darkness

waiting for you to see me to

 

This pain i feel its like a knife

Cuttng through me in so meny ways

I cry my heart out

with my never ending days

 

I cry out your name hoping you will come

Its been so long since you went away

I cry out your name praying for you to come

I wanted you to stay with me in every way

 

 

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  • xshatteredxdreamsx
    July 20

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    awwwwwww....im so sorry dont give up...hes up there looking at you and missing you too!!!=]


    • Emo Hearted Emz
      July 21

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      it hurt me so bad

      i wote this my dad and the days get harder every day that im living it his birthday on sunday and i dnt knw what im going to do or how im going to react,


      • xshatteredxdreamsx
        July 21
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        im sorry maybe you could like go see him...well umm..you know what i mean...i really sorry hope you feels better!