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When The Moon Weeps

Missing image
Shadows cast from moon afar
Crystal teardrops, a shooting star
Quickly fading, now earthward bound
Streaking nova without a sound

Descend to earth, as twilight starts
En-capturing all broken hearts
The moon sees all, it cries and weeps
For love gone wrong, as sorrow seeps

Full moon arises, feelings stir
So deep within the soul occur
Missing, longing, as teardrops fall
The moon is wailing, hear it call

Shine rays of hope, within moonbeams
Embedded with forgotten dreams
Erase the sorrow, deep within
The sun will shine, let dawn begin

Rise onward moon, through silent night
Beyond the stars in downward flight
Dry your eyes, do not weep for me
For soon my love returns to me 

Author notes

Contest prompt is Robert Browning quote...

Never the time and the place and the loved one all together!

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  • Sandygram silver member
    September 17
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    Thank you Amanda. Yes, another from deep in my heart. Hugs to you, Sandy


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 16

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    I long to sigh reading this; it is soft, and full of love -
    it is a rare thing in this life to find a love so pure and
    delicate like this You've penned this perfectly


    Stay safe
    Love to You
    ~Manda

  • Superb

    Ah, indeed, it 'tis a very fine write. As usual, imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.


  • Rose-Quartz
    June 28

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    Absolutely Beautiful

    This poem is absolutely beautiful. A beauty that is present in each line and then leaves that beauty nestling in the heart of the reader. I loved this poem it's so gentle and well written. An amazing piece of poetry. Thankyou for sharing its beauty with me. I wish you All Good Luck in the contest. Take care of yourself Sandy. With love& my very best wishes from Rose xxx

    • Sandygram silver member
      June 30
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      Good Morning

      Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate your very nice comment. Hugs and Smiles.

      Blessings, Sandy

  • That quote is amusing seeing as he and Elizabeth made the time and found the place of their own accord....
    Thanks for entering; good luck!

  • this is amazeing grammy
    i love you


    • Sandygram silver member
      June 30
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      Good Morning

      Thank you for the nice comment. Take care. Hugs and Smiles. Bless You, Grammy


  • Rovingone gold member
    June 24
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    Always so romantic and so classic in form. You never cease to amaze me. This was just beautiful.

    • Sandygram silver member
      June 24
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      A Wonderful Comment Ed

      Your comments very nice are always appreciated. A delight hearing from you my friend. Hugs and Smiles for you. Take care.

      Bless You, Sandy

  • Beautiful ! An awesomely celestial read. LOVE IT!!


    • Sandygram silver member
      June 24
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      Lovely Comment

      Thank you for stopping by and reading. You take care, Sandy

  • Awe Inspiring

    Poetically perfect my opinion alone
    The talented writer turns hearts from stone
    Epic majesty of our celestial friends
    Life is forever and never really ends

    • Sandygram silver member
      June 24
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      Lovely comment.

      Good Morning. I love your rhyming comment. Thank you for stopping by and reading. You take care. Hugs and Smiles.

      Bless You,
      Sandy

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