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Loyal

society imposed upon emotional detachments,
breathing life back into fairy tale dreams.
I thought I saved myself from falling
or was it

the unpicturesque things that rescued me
(either way)

I will always be

♥ forever thankful ♥

 

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picture prompt credit: http://moonywolf.deviantart.com/art/married-to-a-swan-103372846
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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    June 27
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    How simple and yet so beautifully done!


  • LionessK silver member
    June 24
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  • JinSays gold member
    June 24

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    oh I love this.
    I love your cutting humor, nicely done sweetheart.
    The end is just perfect.
    Love,
    jin


  • Daxteriana
    June 24

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    nice work. the picture is awesome! also, it tells a truth within the words. i like smiley faces.

    Daxteriana