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Friend

How great and wond'rous a thing,
a gift,
to us our lives do bring,
a smile,
you peer my eyes and blush,
a bloom,
with you all pains do hush,
a hand,
in arms I feel you care,
a hug,
to you my life I share,
my friend.

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  • Aww, this was so deeply
    heartfelt and filled with
    true sentiments within
    for a friend. I love how
    you blended in fragments
    of nature here as well,
    blooming such a gorgeous
    piece of poetry.

    Keep that pen flowing!
    I want to read more
    & more & more