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The AP Rag Time Band

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Roll up, roll up, come see us, the AP ragtime band
our baton twirling leader,
Alice in Poetry Land,
Piccola
on piccolo, cricket jeff on bass
cannons fire on trumpet, with a
prelude, lower case.

Lunar lunacy
sings vocals, poet randy, violin
keyboards played by Adsaige, says the mighty
Jin.
Floating high above us, a
Lavender Butterfly
Autumn Gypsy
mixing, a
wander of the sky.

Solos sung in silence, by
individuality
redbarchettadrive
is rocking constantly
jake summers is our roadie, random goldfish drives the truck
kevin is the owner, rubbing Ark Bear just for luck.

Mystic blue our agent, EmmyB , fantastic dancer

Toxic Angel, neurosine, the fan mail try to answer.
In the cornerer dark and melted,
rejected easter egg
if I've missed you off the list, sorry, please dont beg.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

choose at least ten names and write a rhyme using the names
somewhere in the poem.

I think there are 23, but my apologies to everybody who's name I may have misspelt.

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Comments

  • piccola silver member
    June 28

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    This is so clever!!! I love that I'm playing the piccolo too great work the entry. Thank you.


  • Discoveria
    June 24

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    This is very well-written, much more coherent than my attempt, and amusing too! The first verse, where the user names combine with the instruments very well, particularly stood out. Also kevin rubbing Ark bear for luck

  • LMAO This is so so clever and really funny
    So creative!
    Best wishes with this as your muse trikes up the band