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I'm a Terrible Liar

I can only keep secrets for so long
Before the lies set in
He knows, he knows
Sweetie's gone, so wrong so long
I don't know what to say
And the minutes are counting down
Each burning and curling into delicate ash
Before my eyes
I'm a terrible liar
And, perhaps, I'll burn there one day as well

-andi

Author notes

Wrote this in VBS...definitly not the best I can do.

-Andi

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  • Tzipora
    July 1
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    Probably not your best but i enjoyed reading it. Nice write yeaa i liked it.