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The obsessed

Obsession twists the mind,
love becomes a nova
spewing dust ;
the point of no return.

A contest entry

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  • melphleg gold member
    June 24

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    Hey haven't seen anything from you in a while. I honestly can relate to this piece. I have thoughts that I mull over and over. Hope to see you writing more...

  • Purrsanthema
    June 24
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    Congrats on the trophy! You deserved it!


  • CentrifugalCorpse
    June 24

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    Beautiful imagery.
    15 words & 4 lines, nice.
    Thanks for sharing this piece & entering.
    Best of luck!

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