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Teen Judge.

Run by angsty moaning teens,
that wouldn't have a clue,
is the reason I gave up,
and enter only few.

Most have brains of mush.
Misery and strife obsessed,
blank minds of lover's crush.
Self pity and possessed!

They need a break in India,
three miles to carry water.
Arses slapped when they whine
and take those pigs to slaughter!

Life in luxury and riches,
some cannot be happy.
Acting like a bunch of bitches
Their judging is so crappy!
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DQ this if you're under 25.

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  • Judith Chandler
    September 28

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    I am way over 25, and I don't think I was really typical when I was that age! But there are a few of those young uns that may surprise you.

    Enjoyed your write.


  • Obani
    June 27
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    HAHA, i'm under 25, but i get it


  • daviscth silver member
    June 24

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    LOL What a wonderful response for the contest prompt! I see you've given this a lot of thought and come up with just the right way of venting! I love the last verse.... Good luck with this.


  • Jade.Butterfly
    June 24

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    LMAO!!
    This is right!
    You made me giggle with this.I have entered quite a few myself like this..Been there done that!
    The last stanza was the best! The was just what I was looking for in this contest and you hit right on cue..Thank you so much for entering! Good luck
    -Mandi

    P.S.
    I'm over 25.