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You are so pretty.

You are so pretty.
Your lashes stand tall--
a brilliant army
with thick black armor.
Your eyes glitter
reflecting the universe.
Your lips are curved
like cupid's bow;
Your arrows hit
so sharp, so small

I gasp.
You are so pretty.

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