sacred weeds flutter
thru emerald waves searching
for a cold hand grasping
absolutely nothing.
Author notes
isn't it funny how i have all these ideas for poems
but this is what comes out?
buhhhhhaagggggggggg
A contest entry
- you fit into me by zillion.
539 points, ended June 30, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
oh, say what you mean
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The first time I read this, I paid no mind to the category it was set in and felt this poem was about a sense of lonliness. About suicide. After reading what it was really about (yeah...I'm kinda slow sometimes) I realized that maybe I wasn't completely on the wrong road, just going down it the wrong way. Very elegant. "Emerald waves" is such a beautiful image.
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i knowwwwwwwwwwwwww how you feel. WHERE IS POEMZ?! we want to come visit you.
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DOOOO IT.
in all seriousness. i have a crash-worthy living space now. shabam -
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you are the reason juj and i still draw breath, evenly
you're like a goddess.
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