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walk with me.




there are holes
in the skies, holes in your eyes,
holes in my words. too many holes
and nothing to fill it with.

it’s raining.
the soil feels cold, i dig my foot inside
and twirl around. i laugh. the world
feels smaller.

i thought
you liked rain. i thought a lot of things
and fell. you stared with the emptiest eyes
and said

‘i’m here for you’.

i laughed.




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  • decode
    August 11
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    I do enjoy indulging in reading your poetry.


  • Beauty Of Silence
    June 29

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    I GOT THIS!

    what a sarcastic twist at the end. ooh, love your imagery by the way. i mean, "i emptiest eyes" <-- who comes up with such stuff. just fascinates me girly. and this just reminded me of the times i was in the rain. its just so fun keep writing missy!


  • Tinkerbell-Or-Me
    June 24

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    "i thought
    you liked rain. i thought a lot of things
    and fell. you stared with the emptiest eyes
    and said

    ‘i’m here for you’.

    i laughed."


    this made me want to go outside and run around in the rain.
    mud mud mud and lies.
    lovely.