Downy doe eyed and new,
gently sweet and powdery,
elfish squeak of joyous speak,
lion roars of needful cries,
tiny hands and open face
urge her to always rise.
But in the early darkened morn
when they lie reposed in form,
her eyes sagging and body bleak,
he sleeps in quiet angelic peace.
Exhausted, she has appointments to keep,
she loves him deeply, but wishes at night he'd sleep.
A contest entry
- Write What YOU Think SHE feels Inside by doyouloveit.
700 points, ended July 2, 6 entries
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What do you feel?
Comments
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very well done your words fit perfectly into her world for he did keep her up later at night and she is a very very busy person thanks again
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those tender toes and cooey moans of a babe half asleep and a Mom or Gram trying to get her rest through it all. How I do still remember 23 long years ago. I wish I were there.
good flow
Tamara
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