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Chilli Sauce

Red chilli sauce
lit my throat aflame,
a torch on my eggs
puts me in screams,
my esophagus in pain.

Acid in a bottle,
dragon juice,
my dog eats it not.

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This is my first attempt to write a poem from a word bank. I first took the words; dog, torch, esophagus and egg and wrote the following sentence. The chilli sauce on my eggs torched my esophagus, not even the dog wanted it. I then proceeded to write a poem based on that sentence and it's images.

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  • Mariana gold member
    June 25

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    I think you have done well with your first word bank, Stevie.

    I Love You loads my Friend

    Mariana