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a silly little wish

I looked up.
I saw a shooting star,
I saw a shooting star in the dark sky.
I made a wish,
I made a wish to be with you.

I looked down.
I saw a penny,
I saw a penny on the gravel.
I made a wish,
I made a wish to be with you.

I looked to the right.
I saw birthday candles,
I saw birthday candles on a lavender cake.
I made a wish,
I made a wish to be with you.

I looked to the left.
I saw a dandelion,
I saw a dandelion on the lawn.
I made a wish,
I made a wish to be with you.

I look straight ahead.
I see you,
I see you right here in front of me.
I made a wish,
I made a wish and it came true.

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  • glenn shannon silver member
    June 24

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    how beautiful that a wish became a reality i does with me but sometimes with a twist i never expected i say be ware of what you wish for coz you just might get it ,, i like the simplicty of i saw
    then where i saw its cool as cheers glennx


  • teenparent
    June 23
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    is there an underlying meaning to this poem?