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Radio Interference


Bing! Bing! Bing!

Someone’s gonna call..

Bing! Bing! Bing!

*Cell phone rings*

Shhhhh!!
Zap! Zap! Zap!

Hello!

~What?~

Hello!
I’ll try – callin’again

~What?!~

SHHHHHHH!!
SHHHHHHH!!

Author notes

I'm not sure if this qualifies as a poem but it is a bad case of radio interference.. the bing bing is what is sounds like when the cell phone is about to ring and there is a near by radio!

25 words exactly.. I made some contractions and some stuff together.. it's not grammatical but it's a phone call! And one gone bad!

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  • Don't you hate dropped calls, interference and such?

    I like this

  • lol, i totally know what you mean!!
    whenever im near something electrical and my phones about to ring it makes that weird beeping noise! i love this piece, it's put a huge smile on my face. brilliant take on the prompt
    best of luck in the contest

    ElectricBloom