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falling for you

What would you do

If I told you I was falling for you.

Would you say you were falling for me too

Or make a big seen & say this can't be true.

If I gave you my heart

would you just break it & tear it apart.

Or would you love me & care for me

& tell me that we are ment to be.

If you really did chose me

Would it be just to use me.

When you kiss me would you do out of love

Or just be doing it to try to get more of.

When you look in my eyes & see me cry

Would you comfort me & tell me it will be alright or just sigh.

Would you hold me when im scared

Or would you stare or even care.

After a big fight would you call me day & night

Just to hear my voice & make sure I was alright.

Would you kiss me softly

But love me deeply.

Would you make out with me

Just out of jelousy.

Would you stick up for me when I was being put down

Or would you just kick me when I lower than the ground.

I want to be the girl that is in your arms

The one that you are comforting through the storms.

I want you to tell me everything is going to be alright

Even when they are tight.

The one you call baby

Even when things are shady.

All I want to do

Is tell you I'm falling for you.

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  • its excellent makes one think about how we affect others in a relationship sometimes men just assume its all good but dont know they are putting the boots in clever pen here glenn

  • its excellent makes one think about how we affect others in a relationship sometimes men just assume its all good but dont know they are putting the boots in clever pen here glenn

  • This is really good. Maybe if guys read this they would understand how we feel.


  • Redsox24
    June 23

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    This is incredible. =]] I wish all guys would read this poem because then they would actually have an understanding of how a girl wants to be treated. Do you mind if I use this for something? =]]]]]


  • teenparent
    June 23
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    I'd call you if we were fighting or not. I'd call you every morning and wake you up, just so I'm the first voice that you hear. I'd catch you if you ever fell, I'd hold you if you were crying, I'd pull you back if you tried walking away, I'd kiss any tears away from your eyes.

    If you're falling for me, then let me catch you.

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