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Picnic of Love

Let us make a feast
Upon the summer grass
Let us find a quiet place
And make the moment last

In the far high country
Where we cannot be disturbed
Away from the seething world
That's rushing and perturbed

There we'll make a kingdom
Where we two may bide
Vowing not to leave
Forever, side by side

Dare I spread before you
My bounty of dreams
Sharing humble bread and cheese
Wine chilling in a mountain stream

So many years before us
So little time to waste
Of all the things before us
Your soft cheek I ache to taste

Your lips warm before me
The taste I love the best
Lost on a hillside
The embers of the day burning in the west

And so begins our picnic
In the quiet glen
With Love's thousand purposes
As I kissed you--then kissed you again.


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  • guardianhost gold member
    July 17
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    Awakening ...Romance

    Eloquent, heartfelt ...jaw dropping awesome! Thank you again kind sir!

  • You paint a beautiful picture of love shared and the beauty of nature. Congratulations on your Silver.


  • Three Doves
    June 25
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    Such a glorious day!


    • playjazz67
      June 26
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      Yes, the day was one of those that burn themselves into your memory....


  • AllexisReed
    June 24
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    Thank you for entering my contest

    This is a beautiful poem.

  • Great

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