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dear aanika.

dear aanika.

sometimes, i get on just to see if you have written anything new and when i find that you haven't, my heart seems to sink lower then it does for anything else. you're words make me feel alive. they are so deep and beautiful no matter how sad and tragic they are. and darling, they hold more meaning then god's heaven above.

seeing your heart spilled out in poetry is like seeing the pain im sure is in your eyes and i want to come to you and somehow drain it all out of your veins but i cant and so i walk away knowing you could be filled with somuchmore than you are. it almost breaks my heart that you dont see the beauty you hold, inside and out, and how your heart is something so much bigger and better then all the things on earth-- including earth itself.

sometimes, on 11:11 and shooting stars and fallen eyelashes and necklace clasps i wish that just one time i'd be able to write something as beautiful as you do but then i realize that everyone's different and for now, im fine with just reading yours. your words are perfection rolled out on paper and unforgettable.

[i feel like i know you more by reading your poetry then i ever could by actually talking to you. and somehow, it breaks my fragile ribs and forces them to pierce through my lungs every time i read of your sadness.  i don't want you to hurt. idontwantanyonetohurt. but thats not the way life works. i do want you to know though-- i'd take away your pain, if i only knew how.]

i understand what its like to feel like you need to fix something but in reality its not even broken which makes it impossible to be fixed. and i know how it feels to be in love with love yet be so scared to love and be loved. and i know what its like for your little brother to mean more to you than anyone and everyone and it still seem like he's galaxies away-- but i also know what its like to hold on to that one special star because something makes it the brightest and aanika, don't ever, ever let go.

hold your head up sunshine, you're too pretty to let it fall.

love always,
crystal

Author notes

m y . s t a r s . d o n t . s h i n e

i feel like this poem isn't good enough when it comes to describing you. imreallysorry. ♥

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  • decode
    June 24

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    second paragraph is probably my favorite part.
    but this whole thing is so good!
    everyone has different styles; you do well writing in yours.

    wonderful letter. <3


  • aanika
    June 23

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    i just opened this thinking, "okay i'll comment it later" but after reading it i can't wait. this is the one of the most beautiful, amazing things anyone has ever written for me, and it's filled with the most incredible compliments.

    i can't believe that you see me like this. it's still so surprising to me that people like my poetry. i just want to say thank you a million times. this letter was the first thing i read when i woke up this morning and i think it's safe to say that it just made my day.

    <3

    • my.stars.dont.shine
      June 23
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      you are very welcome. and i can definatly believe that i see you like this. =p open your mind a bit dear, see the things that you dont see unless you look for-- you are amazing aanika.

      im glad it made your day and im glad you liked it. ♥


  • Hope Angel silver member
    June 23

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    Aw this really sweet and beautiful. Anyone getting this letter is l u c k y. haha

    I love you
    Good luck in the contest

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