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It's All About the Ride!

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Whoever painted lines on the road
never seen me using a crayon.

I'm a color outside the lines kind-of-a-guy,
because there's no line I will stay on.
 
I'm a turn 'round, burn 'em down;
shake the ground kind-of-a-guy.
This car don't have wings,
but I'll prove that these horses can fly.

Yeah, my car is so cool, 
I'd say it's a safe bet
that her passengers would never say,
"Hey, are we there yet?"

Coming to a stop

only causes frustration.
Because it's all about the ride,
never the destination.

I'll just take my chances
when her engine starts to glow.
If my crayon starts meltin',
she'll still giddy up, go.

Because it's all about the ride,
never the destination.
Coming to a stop
only causes her frustration.

You would swear you heard thunder,
it's just me ready to explode.
Give me my crayons and my accelerator,
and we will paint the open road.
 
I'm a turn 'round, burn 'em down;
shake the ground kind-of-a-guy.
This car don't have wings,
but I'll prove that these horses could fly.


Yeah, my car is so cool, 
I'd say it's a safe bet
her passengers would never say,
"Hey, are we there yet?"


Coming to a stop

only causes her frustration.
Because it's all about the ride,
never the destination.

Because it's all about the ride,
never the destination.
Coming to a stop

only causes her frustration.

A contest entry

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  • hahahahaha!

    I LOVED this!

    Def. going to be a finalist ^^


    Well done XD

  • This is one sweet melody and one sweet ride, too, I'm sure. "Because it's all about the ride never the destination." I liked those lines so many layers of meaning, kind of like if you s;ow down you might see where you're going, hmmmm?

  • Ooh I can see why now..
    though of course you knew
    I wouldn't just read the first
    few lines lol..

    Anyways, this was a great write
    and the repitition had a very
    nice effect. Your visuals were
    beautifully crafted & overall,
    I really enjoyed reading.

    Best wishes in the contest to


  • trekkergirl
    June 30
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    wow I like this... the car picture is awesome. Nicely written. Thanks for sharing this with us.

  • ramsi
    June 30
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    perfect a guy's gotta know his ride

  • ramsi
    June 30
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    boy you are gooooooooooood nice background and you really know your machin

  • Damn...

    You really have a way with words. This was AWESOME! Seriously. I'm not even in to cars and I loved it!

    ~Raven

    • That came to me on the way to work the other day and I had written the first lines at a stop sign. Thanks so much Raven!!!

  • This is so awesome. I love it.


  • Antebellum
    June 25

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    "Whoever painted lines on the road
    never seen me using a crayon.
    I'm a color outside the lines kind-of-a-guy,
    because there's no painted line I will stay on."

    I love these lines. an amazing write..I like the way this is worded.


  • Antebellum
    June 25
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    "Whoever painted lines on the road
    never seen me using a crayon.
    I'm a color outside the lines kind-of-a-guy,
    because there's no painted line I will stay on."

    I love these lines. an amazing write..I like the way this is worded.

    • Thanks so much luhtishuhh!
      I was driving to work one day last week,
      and I had written the first lines at a stop sign.
      Thanks again!


  • DeJaBlue
    June 23

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    I love this, partly because I LOVE that car!!!! and if I had one, I'd probably be under the jail with so many speeding tickets, lol...a wonderful write, red!


    Amy

  • nice. lyrics I'm thinking? reminds me of Duke's of Hazard and country songs. I kinda wanna see what chords I could put together for this.

    "Coming to complete stops
    only causes her frustration."
    Slow
    To
    Observe
    Police.

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