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Love....as I know it!!!

Nameless pain called love is creeping into me...
Its trying to trap me in...and make me fleee
A golden swan caled hope is swimming into the shores
Far from the shadow of loneliness...that hovers d floor

A pearl drop of tears fall down and dissolves into the earth..
It rises like a phoenix ...a messiah of love!

An unforgetful sweet music...escapes from within me
An aura of love...engulfs and enlightens me...
As I walk down the shore...just You & Me

This one's random thought!!!

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  • leo2
    October 25

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    Other than a couple of casual misspellings that spoil the singleness of thought in this one I see the seed is still growing.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • bigtooth
    June 23
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    so touching....!!!!

    good work..Mr.poet..!!!