At times I feel low...
The painful swell in my heart grows...
My feelings on a painful slope...
Then I see you arrive and think...maybe theres hope..." J the Fallen
"I tremble and fight, crawling the floor
heart and soul battered once more
Tears cinge the corners of my eyes
all pain burning the flesh within..stripping the outer disguise Passionspromise
Fallen from grace...
Away from the light and any trace...
I look up at you...
And hope for your embrace... J the Fallen
Rising from ash, I stand
warmly grasping your trembling hand
Breathing intensifies, as I search the night
greedily holdin you close, savoring the light Passionspromise
Always hesitantly leaving my world of nightmares...
The light burns my eyes like solar flares...
Close to you, help me fight...
Guide me through this world of light... J the Fallen
Eye to eye, a smile in place
Filled to the core, of promise and grace
A shield for you I shall always be,
as together we explore the light completely Passionspromise
Looking into your eyes...
They peirce me, Heaven's spies...
I tremble inside, hoping for your patience...
Needing, your warmth and acceptance... J the Fallen
Author notes
Thank you..."J"
This wonderful poet sent the first lines..just speaking to me..and I penned on..(of course) and several stanzas produced this piece.
I am proud and so happy that he has written this way..Indeed, I do NOT want to blemish his "image" of being a dark writer. Just happy to see him in a new light as well. Thanks Hon for penning this piece with me and bringing a ray of light. Many of us are battling something or another and this speaks loud and clear.
J the Fallen is a must read poet...
Love
Tory
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It's so very well done here, a wonderful collab by you both
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I like it quite a bit. It seems very worldly and down-to-earth, but at the same time transcending. It's a strange quality that's not easy to capture. Good job!
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Passionspromise & J the Fallen
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Nice collab guys
Well done here! things seem to be working out well as you two write a wonderful work of art. Congrats to both for a remarkable effort, Love Rick That's for you passions sorry J dont share
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His skill is beyond belief darling, and indeed so very proud and happy to work magic with blending of pens here.
(and if you shared your love with a man I would literally...*torys packing up a ap suitcase..* lol...oh wait you said you didnt share your love
well then alls good
Thanks for reading and comment dear, we appreciate it
Love
Tory
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