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Chalet



oversized ashtray -
I could fit my foot
in it.

television, with wire
hanging over the side.

my shadow rests against
the damn old walls.

a painting of cats and
dogs looms over the pull-out bed.

bag of music next to my
leg - screamadelica, etc etc

furniture around me - the kind
you'd find in charity shops.

not tired now - I managed
ten hours sleep.

don't want to use the toaster
because there is filth inside of it.

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  • LeanneBridgewater
    September 20
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    i like the sound of this chalet.. it is homely.. great descrip's you ship.. esp the 'screamadelica, etc etc' - that's my favourite said