So sick of this hollow
Feeling set so deep inside
A pain so sharp that
I thought that I would die
And I hate the way that you look at me now
And I hate the way that you look at me now
So follow me down
And break beneath what's left of us
Please just let me drown
Suffocate beneath this distrust
So follow me down
And break beneath what's left of us
Please just let me drown
Suffocate beneath this distrust
So tired of falling
Further away from myself
So sick of hating this
Cage that I built myself
And I hate the way that you look at me now
And I hate the way that you look at me now
So follow me down
And break beneath what's left of us
Please just let me drown
Suffocate beneath this distrust
So follow me down
And break beneath what's left of us
Please just let me drown
Suffocate beneath this distrust
And now I'm falling, falling
And now I'm falling, falling
And I can't shake this god damned feeling
Can't shake this, can't shake this
And I hate the way that you look at me now
And I hate the way that you look at me now
So follow me down
And break beneath what's left of us
Please just let me drown
Suffocate beneath this distrust
So follow me down
And break beneath what's left of us
Please just let me drown
Suffocate beneath this distrust
A contest entry
- Best Emo Write Ever by VampireKitty-.
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Comments
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Deep...insightful
an feel your pain and anguish... great poem -
So follow me down
And break beneath what's left of us
Please just let me drown
Suffocate beneath this distrust
So follow me down
And break beneath what's left of us
Please just let me drown
Suffocate beneath this distrust
Very nicely penned piece here....full of power, emotion and awesome wording. I thank you so very much for sharing this one with us. Good luck to you and keep penning good stuff like this one for us to read!

