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So....

So sick of this hollow
Feeling set so deep inside
A pain so sharp that
I thought that I would die

And I hate the way that you look at me now
And I hate the way that you look at me now

So follow me down
And break beneath what's left of us
Please just let me drown
Suffocate beneath this distrust
So follow me down
And break beneath what's left of us
Please just let me drown
Suffocate beneath this distrust

So tired of falling
Further away from myself
So sick of hating this
Cage that I built myself

And I hate the way that you look at me now
And I hate the way that you look at me now

So follow me down
And break beneath what's left of us
Please just let me drown
Suffocate beneath this distrust
So follow me down
And break beneath what's left of us
Please just let me drown
Suffocate beneath this distrust

And now I'm falling, falling
And now I'm falling, falling
And I can't shake this god damned feeling
Can't shake this, can't shake this

And I hate the way that you look at me now
And I hate the way that you look at me now

So follow me down
And break beneath what's left of us
Please just let me drown
Suffocate beneath this distrust
So follow me down
And break beneath what's left of us
Please just let me drown
Suffocate beneath this distrust

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  • Graley
    September 17
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    Deep...insightful

    an feel your pain and anguish... great poem


  • Heroesrox
    August 9

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    So follow me down
    And break beneath what's left of us
    Please just let me drown
    Suffocate beneath this distrust
    So follow me down
    And break beneath what's left of us
    Please just let me drown
    Suffocate beneath this distrust

    Very nicely penned piece here....full of power, emotion and awesome wording. I thank you so very much for sharing this one with us. Good luck to you and keep penning good stuff like this one for us to read!