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Cement Sex

Your hands like hammers

Love like a kick to the jaw

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  • Chainsaw
    November 6
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    Spectacular.


  • zillion
    June 23

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    I like how you expanded on the theme of "love Hurts" (not to quote Nazareth or anything ). Must be painful sex.