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torn

my heart is beating so fast
i don't know which way to turn
my head says one thing
my heart says another

i feel torn

my heart is breaking
my head is spinning
i feel like there is know tomorrow

i feel torn

i feel like my family wants things that i cant do
my friends need me what else can i do

i feel torn

if i do what my family says i wont have a good friendship
if i do what my friend want my family will reject me

i feel torn

sorry friend my heart has chosen
my family comes first
so my head is what i chose to listen to
sorry friend our friendship is torn into two pieces

i feel torn

please understand my dear friend my family comes first and is more important then our friendship


i hope my friend understands after she reads this that i cant do what she needs me to do

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  • LadyOfFate
    June 23

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    I know what you are saying but I don't understand. Then again maybe others don't understand. I believe I am the friend you were speaking about. I recived no news from you and had to go to you despite what you said I didn't recive the information. You will have to explain this to me, because I don't understand. You left a giant hole in what I need to know so I can understand at all. The moment you knew you should have said something, called me and never given up until you had gotten me. For you see, I have been forsaken by my family and friends. And I feel a bit betrayed for not getting told sooner. I was even going so far to defend each and every bad thing said at what others said when they saw what was happening. You never done this before. So I just want to know, what is going on. How Can one understand if all one sees is nothing. Please be a friend and at least tell me that much.

    And what about saidan!!!!!