You tip-toe around the golden room,
with it's high ceilings and
glass chandeliers. Hanging above
over your halo, reflecting a natural glow.
Your wings are extended,
your butterfly qualities exceeding
the sky's limit. And you soar around with
your petals flapping beneath you.
Light splurges through the windows and
your velvet skin dazzles like stars between
the constellations of my eyes. Such beauty
has never been unclothed to my naive oculars.
And with candied lips and pearled
bicuspids, you favored my applause. Ending your waltz
and dismissing the crowd, I indulged in only the
memories of your pulchritude.
Author notes
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A contest entry
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Comments
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This is really beautiful. Nice imagery thanks for entering
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You're frekkin amazing with prompts. Like. Mad. They drive me mad. >_< Especially when I fail so hard at them.
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This is magnificant. The way this was written, with so much visual imagery, and so much emotion, it leaves me stunned. "Light splurges through the windows and your velvet skin dazzles like stars between the constellations of my eyes" Those lines are simply amazing! I really enjoyed this piece!
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Thats actualy good for you
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Awesome job
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I'm speechless, this blew em away. -
Yeah and you say you're shit at poetry. Does mummeh have to scold you? ^-^
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have i ever told you how talented you are? 8D
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