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Was just a piece of clay,
You shaped me into a man,
Mould me once again if you may,
Oh God! Make me faithful to you.

*~*Aun Ali*~*
{Lead by Example}

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 24

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    Amen..love the message..and its tone..wonderful poetry..thought it is litle bit short..but my thanks for entering my friend...


    • Aun Ali
      June 25
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      An attempt of the contestant is successful when the host is pleased with it. And I think I am successful in the attempt.