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bella swan

your piercing childish tears
only make this unrealistic
twisted fairy tale romance
cover up the fact that you live
in the souls of twelve and thirteen
year old girls
who think love is full
of long awaited goodnight kisses
as their immortal boyfriend
climbs into their window
at a speed that flashes by their eyes.
no_you see that is not the beauty
true romance writers
tried to capture.
innocence is turned in
for naive twiddle dumb
fantasies
that make love
seem like
overly
cliche
Disney
bullshit.
poor girls will grow up
thinking that need to
play the victim
just to get a prince.

well in this case a vampire.

Author notes

I just finished the third book in the Twilight series...I really am starting to hate all of the characters. They are all whiney, especially that Bella Swan. Grow a back bone! You are making woman seem like victims...

Any advice would be lovely?

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  • requiempoet gold member
    June 22

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    I hate that bitch. I hate that book. I hate that it's so popular and I hate that it's being compared to my awesometastic Buffy the Vampire Slayer.


    • bloved
      June 27
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      I hate it sooo much. I can't believe people think its good.

  • those books suck b
    i thought would be a subject that we could agree on lol
    great poem anyway
    stay real


    • bloved
      June 27
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      the books do suck because the characters suck. So I agree. it just took mer three books to figure it out! thanks