Never am I to see your smile again
Never am I to hear your laugh again
Nor am I to see your face
Or hear your voice at all
Why god chose to take you I shall never know
Why you chose to take yourself I will never understand
Why, Why, Why?!
So many questions
Ones only you can answer
But you cannot
So they shall remain unanswered forever more
I am resigned to missing you forever
Resigned to missing your face and voice
To missing your loving nature
To missing your memory and missing You
As always though
Forever more I shall love you
I shall love you Forever & Ever!
Author notes
I wrote this poem about my father, who passed away on September 17th of last year. This is a meer fraction of all of the questions and thoughts I have had roaming my mind since his passing. It is also to tell him, that I will still love him forever and ever!
Please tell me what you think
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this is a great tribute, it sounds like he commited suicide, which I hope isn't true, either way I am so sorry for your loss, he had a great impact on your life and You keeping his memory alive is the best way to show him that you'll alwys love him, very deep and sad. truly heart touching write,great jo
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I think you did a wonderful job tributing your father and to try and release some of the questions and pain that you are feeling for him. You can feel your sadness, but also the love you have for him will never go away. Great job!
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Well Written
A very emotional and well written piece. ENjoyed it immensely.
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Very well done
so much emotion in every line....imagery of questions unanswered are very well done. You have captured a lot in very few words. A great one for your dad...thanks for sharing
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Good
You have managed to create an atmosphere of a somber reality, taking the reader deep within your most trusted thoughts. Your words manage to capture a state of being and paint it with vivid emotions onto the paper for all to feel.
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a beautiful piece! your emotions are conveyed beautifully.
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Great Tribute and message
This is a great tribute and message to your dad who has passed on. Even though you may have many unanswered questions, your connection is everlasting, and both of you are enveloped forever in the love!All the best-peace & blessings...
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Touching!
It is indeed sad to read this poem. Hope you find your answers and peace.
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