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Snippets from a Mourner.

Enter blood,
Crimson disgust,
Surfacing, sliming,
The sole messenger of wounds.

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Stuck in a timeframe.
Searching you on my bed.
Forgetting you're dead.
Forgetting you're gone.

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Icy winds chill the bones.
Casting limbs immobile.
A plain urge attempts to thrive.
A candle in a storm.

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Running away from insanity.
Wanting to remember you, smiling.
To think of you and warm my heart.
With a cup of coffee rather than tears in whiskey.

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The new if good, comfortable.
The old never fades away.
The old wasn't bad, only outdated.
The new is a pain...but its new.

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  • wbiro gold member
    June 22

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    a good representation of all the vague notions that lead people's lives most of the time... until they hit the brick wall...


  • his kiss
    June 22
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    Ur gonna win zat contest Hun!