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It's Never Easy Saying Good Bye * Revised

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2 Corinthians 5:8 We are confident I say, and willing rather to be absent from the body and to be present with the Lord.

 

 

 

I'ts never easy saying goodbye,

Though I may with many tears.

I'll never forget you in my heart,*

A memory I'll always hold  dear.*

Saying goodbye is never easy,*

I wished you might have stayed*

God called you home ,

Though sadness fills my heart today*

I'll always remember your  spirit,*

Your friendship worth more  then  gold.*

We've laugh and cried together*

To be a comfort to one anther's soul*

Saying goodbye is never easy,

You must believe that I did care.

My joy is knowing you're happy,*

At home safe in heaven there.*

You left your memories behind*

Of kind acts, and good deeds.*

You left behind a mark of beauty,*

A blessing and  a noble creed 

Saying goodbye is never easy,

God too

 k you home I won't ask him why

My friend I'm happy your at-last*

There, by our loving Saviors side*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

This was written for my friend Terry she is at home in heaven and I'm happy for her we went today to bury her ashes. I will miss her grealy she was a very sweet women who taught me alot . Please feel free to share this poem if you know anyone who is grieving it is a gift to be shared.

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  • Wow very impressive. Nice work on this one!


  • darlee77 gold member
    September 5
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    This is a wonderful and loving tribute to your friend. I am so sorry for your loss.
    God bless.

  • WOW ! WHAT A GOOD USE OF WORDS ! I REALLY ENjOYED THiS !

  • We lose those we love to a higher cause, we cannot control when and where our time comes to an end, suffice to say we live our lives as best we can and hope that when the time comes we are ready and prepared.

    I like it, I like it so!


  • Ellek
    June 25
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    Wow

    This poem is so touching to anyone who's lost a loved one. But we should always be happy, our loss is their gain. God bless you!


  • Seven Deaths
    June 22

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    this is an amazing poem. I'm sorry about your lost. I love the poem. it is extreamly beautiful and touching. Comment my poems also please

  • This is soo beautiful. Your thoughts are well expressed towards your friend. Goodbyes are never easy this poem made me feel happy!

  • seay49 gold member
    June 22

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    I like this poem alot!

    I tend to write structured poems that have stanzas and punctuation. I might have started:

    My friend I know I must say goodbye,
    though I will with many tears.
    I'll never forget the precious times,
    that made our friendship so dear.

    Saying goodbye is never easy,
    I wish that you could have stayed.
    God must need one more angel,
    To be a kind friend to have each day.

    I hope this gives you an idea of how you might improve this poem,

    -Jeff

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