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Druken dramas and placid plays

Puppets playing perfectly
in sea of various emotions.
twisting, turning, tenderly
waking words for a reason .

Like the drapery in the background
and faces behind the mask.
All covered in materialism
their roles, speech and task.

Projecting lessons never to be heard
grey drama's on the stage.
Witness to this, a special audience
applauding to its grace.

Mesmerised to its fruitless effort,
people leave the place.
but seldom forget the moral of the play
right at the exit gate.

drunken drama's left to itself
and placid lies the play.
No thoughts, no feelings, no emotion
all conveyed
...and then shoved to drain .( with time)


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prompt - drama's and plays

well drama's and plays are seldom conducted with a message behind, inorder to convey something or for a cause but the thought though coneyed doesnt spread far, as people witnessing them just forget it as soon as they r out of the theator . To bring about any change mass awakening is required and this medium would only be affective if people start thinking from their heart and not just thinking but start putting their thoughts to action.

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