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I heard the news today, oh boy.

I heard the news today, oh boy.
She shouted over the tempest and
said that it’s ending.
The empty room boomed with violent silence,
reasonable unbelievables, conceptually inconceivable evils froze my closed lips as the wind ripped me apart.
I understood,
I understood,
I understood
each part.

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  • theworld
    June 22
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    I like it when you write short things.


  • WisdomWarrior
    June 22

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    Mmm hmm... I could take this to so many different levels my friend. We are often betrayed by our logic and reason but the ultimate is to spit inthe face of the wind while your mind argues with your senses that the wind cannot exist.

    I truly love this write. Thanks for sharing.

    John


  • Ishtar
    June 22
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    Oh, boy.