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to someone whom i care about

Your in my memories like a scar on my arm,
When the wind blows, all will stay clam,
Once the blood stops falling, roses bloom,
Once I see your face, I stop feeling blue

Childhood pain gives me fear,
It will never become clear,
We are like angels, giving confessions,
But in reality its only depression,

Round and round everywhere it goes,
Where it stops nobody knows,
Hopefully happy times are in sight,
Every time I see you, I feel bright.

My future is like a shooting star,
I don't have to travel for you very far,
I've grown free and spread my wings,
Everywhere I go the little bird sings,
When babies laugh and crickets cry,
The sky sighs on a moonlight night,
My love for you is in sight,
Robins singing and doves loving,

Round and round everywhere it goes,
Where it stops nobody knows,
Happy times are now in sight,
You are the light in my life, shining bright,

Smiles and laughter fills my days,
Every time I see you, you make the grey go away,
I use to see black and white,
Because of you I see a colourful sight,
Because of you I have over come my fears,
And now all have become clear.

this isnt really a poem, its just me getting emotion out and in the mood im in, this is the only way i could put it in.

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  • Well, I believe you got them out excellently.


  • peadiotrocity101
    October 17

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    i love this

    i love this so much that it is so great for me to see it is a wonderful extra-ordinary,prestidigitational piece.It might touch a lot of people.It is very special.To me that is what it is:Awesome

  • Bob Fox
    June 24

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    Poet

    Not all is black and white. However depression can make it feel that way. But alas there are beautful colors. The trees, the sky, the ocean & your eyes. Smile and write of those colors.

  • oh my its so cute and and some partz made me cry... i'm going to bookmark this beacause its so great,

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  • i loved this!!!
    it was a wonderful piece and this is not a poem?!?!
    brilliant work babes keep up the fab work
    love you xoxox

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