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She's Falling (To The Demons)

She's struggling with demons
And she wishes someone could see
That she's giving up
She's letting the demons
Of her hell take over
Never in her life has she
Been so ready to end
End it all
[Chorus] When her legs grow weak
        And she falls to the floor
        Will anyone even notice
        She wonders if anyone
        Will pick her back up
        She hopes they'll tell her
        Everything will be fine
She's faltering in her
Ability to keep up the fight
All she needs is someone
Who will show her the light
And lead the way back
To her once happy life
[Chorus] When her legs grow weak
        And she falls to the floor
        Will anyone even notice
        She wonders if anyone
        Will pick her back up
        She hopes they'll tell her
        Everything will be fine
She screams out
Into the darkness
"Please light my way"
"Don't let me die tonight"
"Lord I beg of you"
"Don't let me fall again"
[Chorus] When her legs grow weak
        And she falls to the floor
        Will anyone even notice
        She wonders if anyone
        Will pick her back up
        She hopes they'll tell her
        Everything will be fine
"Don't give up on me"
2-5-09

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  • nice

    very well written! I liked it a lot.