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sm...Beauty of the Windswept Tree

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Lovely on a hill stands a windswept tree

stripped of all it's leaves aged by the weather

 

The patina branches reflect in the sun

casting shadows of life in the surroundings

gnarled are the branches from the elements

creating a life within the deadwood

telling stories of ageless time

 

The voices of the wind echo times of the past

hardship, heartbreaks as it feels it's way

through the branches of defeat

 

Beautiful is the silhouette of the specism of time

as the sun sets at the horizon

and shadows of darkness close the night as we sleep

 

Awakened early morn the branches reach the sky

lifting the spirits of last goodbyes

leaving shadows in it's wake

 

The sun rolls overhead creating beauty of it's own

lasting until the sunset once again sleeps

 

 

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  • ricachic gold member
    July 18

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    The old tree (old man), lovely words, there is beauty in the ageing, "lifting the spirits of last goodbyes" Beautiful.

    Rick


  • rbruce gold member
    June 22
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    A lovely reminder that beauty is everywhere. I love this poem.


  • arafura gold member
    June 22
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    Excellent! I love this.


  • The Drifter
    June 22

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    You panited a beautiful picture of a wind swept tree plus causing the reader to wonder what all this tree has seen, so to speak. A very good write. Thank You.


  • GothicFyre
    June 22

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    Excellent writing, I loved it. I really did. It was evocative and beautiful. I wanted to cry reading it, it was amazing.

  • Bob Fox
    June 22

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    Poet

    and we often overlook or never take the time to see that wonderful story . but you the poet have done the reader a great service. Excellent poem.

  • Beautiful write

    I really enjoyed this. The imagery is wonderful.
    Best of luck to you.

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