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Juliet meets Cinderella- just another fairy tale

As I sit on this lonely balcony
I whisper into the night,
"Where is my Prince Charming?"
The wind whispers throughthe trees,
I listen to what it has to say,
"He will come to you tonight, He will sweep you off your feet and steal you away."
So, there is a prince.
Who knew this life could be like a fairy tale?
But there is one question,
Will he be the right one?
To be the right prince he should be
Charming, brave,
sweet, big hearted,
caring, and tall would be nice.
"Is he near, dear whispering winds, is he?"
A tall figure climbs up onto my balcony.
The figure steps into the light and speaks,
"Would I suffice?"
I look at him, I recognize him.
An ex-love.
Tears come to my eyes with a smile.
"Yes, you are the right one!"
A smile is brought to his face as he steps closer.
He sweeps me off my feet and gives me a small gift.
A gentle kiss.

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  • Kira65
    June 22

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    I love it, it has a great flow and just the right amount of emotion, i love how you say

    "A smile is brought to his face as he steps closer.
    He sweeps me off my feet and gives me a small gift.
    A gentle kiss."