If words could explain, how my world goes insane
just at the thought of my girl gone away.
Its impossible to do.End up lost and confused
lets just melt into each others arms and let it all subdue.
Give me all your burdens, let me shield you from the rain.
Its time to start observing, what it takes to ease your pain.
All I think about is you not a single doubt its true
that the best day of my life will be when you say I do.
Now and forever give you mountains of pleasure.
Every treasure couldnt measure how much i love that we are now together.
I hope you feel the same. Just know you kill the pain
that I used to have flowing all throughout my veins.
Look into my eyes there isnt any lies. I want us to be together
even after we die. Death Wont Do Us Part, I Get My Breath From your Heart,
I dont ever ever want to be apart
A contest entry
- A heart that loves is always young. by silverscent.
620 points, ended July 6, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I think this is a very sweet poem. I can see you put oodles of emotion and sweetness into this. I must say that parts are verging on cliche, and I know the subject is difficult to write about without hitting a few cliche notes, but with a lot of imagination and talent it can be done.
Anyway, I did enjoy this poem very much. Thanks for entering.
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Each line has a nice rhythm to it and this has a sweet sentiment to it...oh how it is so nice to be in love, I know, for I cherish my wife every moment!
Blessed Be,
Jeremy
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Welcome to Allpoetry!
This is great, one thing i loved is your on-going plot and descriptive language to draw your reader in.
my abscence has caused me to miss alot!
Welcome to AllPoetry!
I hope you enjoy the site and prosper as a poet.
Regards!
Sophia-x
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