This commodity, love
Traded by barter
Men issue it grudgingly
In exchange for an appetite
A satisfaction in the loins
Women, so receptive
Out of babyish innocence
Trade love for satisfaction
Love they crave
Satisfaction, man desires
With coitus all so crude,
But love, deeply emotional
The woman, deeply immersed
All but cries
When he walks away
All he regrets lost
Are flights of passion
When what she has lost
Is all her heart
Wonder then, why women cry
What did you think
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this is written with thought and value
to women and knowing a womans heart
what a beautiful piece you have written
thank you for sharing a part of what is important
to a woman.
love and blessings
Rend
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Thanks
Glad you love it...you did a good job on those 17 words,i love that poem!
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